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  • 01-10-2020
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Mr. Smithers saw a cockroach scanaper across the
classroom floor, as a result he jumped onto his desk
and screeched.

I’m looking for a punctuation check

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mchase25
mchase25 mchase25
  • 01-10-2020

Answer:

Instead of a comma after floor, try putting a period and capitalizing "as." the rest is good!

Explanation:

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